HALP MEEE

[Ashemir Draemis]

So for my art class I'm really split between two ideas. Both require about the same amount of work, so I can't take a 'this one's easier' route. It'd be helpful if you chose the one that sounded better/cooler so I can hurry and get started on this thing.


ANGEL’S CAUTION - ( www.youtube.com/watch?v=mjxKp6LfMsY )

Observe binary stars curving
Incandescent gears trapped in their siding
Countered momentums pushing and whirling
The duet of a marriage arising

Heaven radiates through
The prismatic cradles,
Delivers orders from dominions:
The laws must be upheld

CAUTION
Supernova sanction
Choruses of nuclear fusion
CAUTION
Time and space refraction
Into infinite dimension

MORTALS, FEAR NOT! Your realms are unfolding!
Common people, so brilliant and crafting
Universal constellation’s holding
Connection’s pulse, of minds and souls syncing!

From the bright void, the ensemble’s surging,
I can hear it, so clear and unfading
In the stardust, a counterpoint’s bursting
I can feel it, the cosmos are changing….

Curious virtues work,
As time’s chords link onward,
Seeing invisible binary chains
From an azure origin


CAUTION
Solar inspiration
Lift of tempest’s orchestration
CAUTION
Among life’s emission
What became of our transmission…?


STAND BACK. My Heaven is falling…
In the ether, a new one is dawning
While believers are in the muck crawling,
And yet their faith, full and unwavering….

No, it’s not about faith,
Damned is their decency.
Bright ladies, gentlemen, I believe that
adaptation’s in order.

CAUTION
Stellar confirmation
What sins truly need remission?
CAUTION
Divine evolution
Seraphim seeking salvation


CAUTION
Cosmic absolution
Proceeds forth without attrition
CAUTION
Angelic ascension
Calls reason, faith, and intuition

((Alt. line: “Calls instinct, faith, and cognition”))

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Lepherem’s Justice - ( www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGqlEL9WQW0 )

Adamant, my convictions avowed,
Phoenix’s royal champion unbowed.
I’m the Prince of Lorellep,
I’m the Prince of Justice,
But how can I be a Judge
that is to be responsible for the
Crimes of the morally mad?

Blood
Flows perpetually between those who suffer...
What...
Gives a man the ground to bury others?

Steel
Makes this sword merely a weapon of fervor.
So...
Is Justice’s tool alike to murder’s?

‘Justice’ is just subjective,
A shield for dark actions to hide...
One ‘good’ is not another’s,
For who smashed the heavens and smiled

But when cruel men walk en masse,
It is negligent not to ask:
When the gods stand idle,
And the fates will not act,
And the people cower,
Who will then make them pay for their crimes?

You!
Look into my eyes and swallow your sentence whole!
I
demand tears for tears and a soul for soul!

The innocent need the brave
To administer what they crave!
I hold law untainted!
Truth, honor, and virtue!
And my ‘good’ is better!
And my convictions are absolute!

I care not for any fear,
Nor your shields, nor words insincere!
I’m the Prince of Lorellep!
I’m the Prince of Justice!
And I will be your Judge!
And the wicked will burn for their sins!

[Zoshi Vaika]

I'd personally go with the second one.

But that's just because songs with tempos that go above 208 bpm aren't my style.

*throws two pennies at*

[Kahjit Sekani]

I'm still a big fan of Angel's Caution, but god damn their both amazing. The art for Lepherem's poem may actually mesh better with what your artist already does, though. But the angels.. so epic... so epic. <3